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When Lightning Strikes, What Does Air Do?

Stan Carey, a professional editor from Ireland, writes entertainingly about the English language on his blog Sentence First. Here a children's book about weather leads Stan to ponder which English words best describe what happens to air when it is heated by lightning.
Burst after burst the innocuous thunders brake.
— Robert Southey
John Farndon's Weather: How to Watch and Understand the Weather and its Changes is a charming children's book published as part of DK's Eyewitness Explorers series. On page 47 I read the following line:
Thunder is the sound of air bursting as it is heated rapidly by lightning.

Some examples will help us examine the semantic constellation of burst. Tomatoes that are bursting with ripeness burst in our hands or in the microwave. A tree's roots burst slowly through concrete; the sun bursts through the clouds; swollen rivers burst their banks; the Hulk's clothes burst at the seams; a sportsman makes a burst of speed to burst through the opposing defence; a busy room fills to bursting (point), whereupon the nearest person to the door might burst it open. The recurring sense of rupture or explosivity is evident in this word map from the Visual Thesaurus:
People burst into song when their hearts are bursting with joy, and they burst into shivers if a window bursts open on a cold day; they burst into tears if their hair bursts into flame, and they burst into laughter (or "burst out laughing") when a burst of amusing data enters their minds. We hear bursts of conversation and bursts of gunfire. We see bursts of activity, such as sudden bursts of rain or sunshine. When air or another gas bursts, it is usually from something, such as a tyre, bubble, balloon, nail gun, or a mouth in the act of blowing out a candle (though a puff is usually enough).
The sound of thunder can be a clap, crack, peal, snap, roll, or rumble; each term has its own nuances. But to explain the sound as air bursting is, I think, inferior to expanding rapidly or some such phrase that would minimise the possibility of fuzzy or misleading interpretations. Especially since many people — not least children — are afraid of storms, and air bursting carries more alarming connotations than does air expanding (slight semantic overlap notwithstanding).
Am I being foolish, fussy, or fair? Have I made a storm in my afternoon teacup?



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If I remember correctly, there is one barrier that the air is breaking as it makes thunder: the sound barrier. That does provide some connection to the idea of bursting, but I would not say that the air itself is bursting. I'm a musician, not a scientist, so someone can correct me on all this.
ML
I actually like "burst" much more than "expanding rapidly." To me, at least, there was no misunderstanding. "Burst" is one of the right words for the thing being described....
Your example of the sound barrier is interesting. The very term recalls the "membrane or boundary" I mentioned, and the phenomenon is sometimes accompanied by a very eye-catching clouds that the plane (or whatever) ruptures as it breaks the barrier. To quote the article I linked to: "A sudden increase in pressure and temperature causes surrounding air to expand violently at a rate faster than the speed of sound, similar to a sonic boom. The shock wave extends outward for the first 30 feet (10 m), after which it becomes an ordinary sound wave called thunder."
Paula: Thank you. I'm glad you found the prose helpful, or potentially so for your students. I had to edit those paragraphs, because there were far too many examples in the first draft! Burst is one of those words with a great many figurative and idiomatic uses.
Don: Perhaps I am! Some days and some moments are fussier than others. Would you prefer expand violently to expand rapidly? Rapid might be a bit tame for such a powerful event, though these qualities are relative.
Richard: Lightning can readily be described as a burst, but that's a separate matter. I remain unconvinced that "air bursting" is the best way to describe thunder in a children's science book.
And if you are, and say it, prehaps that would mitigate any harmful effects that the 'burst' might have.
I think it's an expressive word for children and that the more detailed expressions wouldn't have that impact.
Thunder does sound like an explosion, so it's an appropriate expression. It need not result in fear of storms, but more delight depending on how a parent handles it.
If the child has heard thunder, the word 'burst' is just a description, something like a balloon bursting. He or she would make the connection easily.
Me? I'd be more inclined to have problems. I'd be the one thinking of my universe coming apart at the seam with each clap!
My age, reading history, and educational background all contribute to my interpretation of the word burst, and I can't undo any of these factors. But all the responses have helped me consider the (modest) problem in a different way. I've decided that I was being slightly foolish, definitely fussy, and I don't know how fair.
I'd also like to apologise for the typo in my previous comment, when I wrote "accompanied by a very eye-catching clouds". Please ignore the "a"!
You suggested ‘expanding rapidly’ but of course expansion, fast or slow, has no sound. What thunder, a bag bursting, a balloon bursting – and an explosion – all have in common is that air or gases expand so rapidly that they break through the sound barrier, and the sonic boom is the bang you hear in each case, whether it's the boom of a bomb or a clap of thunder
So ‘bursting’ is not just a wonderfully evocative image for children; it is much, much more scientifically precise than the pseudo-scientific sounding (and soundless!) ‘expanding rapidly’ you originally suggested as an alternative.