Word Count

Writers Talk About Writing

Punctuation Point: Joining Independent Clauses

Recently, someone asked me about joining two independent clauses to make a compound sentence. She thought such a sentence would need a comma, but she often found them missing. Today, we'll review how to join independent clauses.

First, a couple of definitions. A clause is a part of a sentence that contains a subject and a verb; it may or may not contain other words. An independent clause can stand as a sentence on its own because it contains a complete thought:

I ran.

Alternatively, a dependent clause does not contain a complete thought and can't stand on its own:

Although I was hungry

A compound sentence is two or more independent clauses (sentences) joined together:

President Obama and Korean President Lee failed to reach agreement on the Korean Free Trade Agreement (FTA) before a joint press conference in Seoul Thursday, but both leaders said the two sides will continue to work towards a final consensus in the near future.

What punctuation do you use between two independent clauses? You have a few options, depending on what parts of speech you use to join the sentences.

  • Coordinating conjunctions. If you use one of the coordinating conjunctions–and, but, for, nor, or, so, or yet–to join two independent clauses, use a comma before the conjunction:

    Swift action saves a man's life, but paramedics fear electric-shock victim may have suffered internal burns to organs.

  • Adverbs. If you use an adverb, such as however, nevertheless, or thus, use a semicolon before the adverb and a comma after:

    We expect average subscription prices to stay around current levels in the near term; however, if promotional activities continue longer than expected or new content agreements adversely impact Dish, this could lower our price estimate of $25.84.

    Note, however, that if you use therefore or thus and you don't need to emphasize the following clause, you can drop the comma:

    The plane took off late due to poor weather conditions; thus we arrived late.

  • Transition expression. If you use a phrase such as for example, similarly, or namely, use a semicolon before the adverb and a comma after:

    After 45 days of no rain, the farmers were worried about their crops; indeed, it was all they thought about.

  • Just punctuation. You might choose to join your independent clauses with just punctuation; in that case, use a semicolon (as this sentence does), a colon, or an em-dash.

In The Copyeditor's Handbook, Amy Einsohn succinctly lays out the rules (IND stands for independent clause):

IND, coordinate conjunction IND.
IND; adverb [,] IND.
IND; transitional expression, IND.
IND; IND. or IND: IND. or IND–IND.

For a deeper explanation and more examples, check out pages 78-79 of Einsohn's book.

Do you have more questions on joining clauses? Leave a comment below!

Click here to read more articles from Word Count.

Erin Brenner is the founder of Right Touch Editing, a customizable editing service. She has been an editing professional for over 15 years and is sought after for her expertise in language mechanics. She works on a variety of media in all levels of editing. In addition, she provides bite-sized lessons to improve your writing on her blog The Writing Resource and is the editor of Copyediting.com, which offers advice and training for those who edit copy. Follow her on Twitter at @ebrenner or on Facebook. Click here to read more articles by Erin Brenner.

Punctuation Point: The Direct Address Comma
Red Pen Diaries: A Dash of Drama
Language:
Metaphors We Live By (Updated)
Brand Names of the Year for 2021
Usage:
Comparative Nonsense
Unexpected Cousins
Grammar:
Seven Sentences You Should Stop Writing
How to Make Your Sentences Shorter